I don't think I'll get into this much because I'm only just starting to read Francione's stuff & research but I'm sure Matt will have a few things to say.

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I actually-probably-mostly agree with David's opinion here.
The only thing I would be careful of though, is the appropriateness of a article dissing vegetarianism as something good on a forum specifically directed at youth, to some their first-point-of-call for info on animal advocacy and all that comes with it - veganism; various single-issues; animal rights; welfarism; incrementalism; new regulation; .... and yes, vegetarianism too.
I think what people believing in and following the Francione dogma must remember is that while people going vegetarian, or eating less meat, or excluding only specific animal products from their diet, while it being (very) far from living "cruelty-free", it is without a doubt something less cruel; it is an improvement. And my God, when you look the nature of agribusiness today, any improvement for the animals is something very significant and absolutely worth fighting for.