Animals Australia Unleashed
Change the World Who Cares? Videos Take Action! The Animals Community Forum Shop Blog Display
1 2 3
Your E-Mail: O Password:
Login Help     |     Join for Free!     |     Hide This

Post a Reply

nothing to do with vegan it just makes me sad

11 - 20 of 24 posts   1 | 2 | 3  


- Kitty Freak - - Kitty Freak - SA Posts: 1071
11 2 Oct 2009
..LollyBean.. said:
how many girls are a beautiful lie

The beautiful lie

shes beautiful to look at
shes soft to touch
her smiles lureing
her voice is sweet
shes stars in your dreams

what you forget, what you dont see,

is her real self she hides,
this tragically fake affair

she uses her nails polished red
to tear out you heart and leave you for dead

her stomach is flat
shes dying in inside
she lacks the fuel that keep us alive

her laugh is mechancal
emotions are what?

You should hear what she says behind your back

she doesnt need friends the mirror will suffice

she cant die plastic lives an eternal life
this is AMAZING! i felt it so much, your an amazing writer. This reminded me of a drawing ive done, its about these same kind of girls, its called 'shes truly ugly'. I really, really love this happy
ReplyQuote

- Kitty Freak - - Kitty Freak - SA Posts: 1071
12 2 Oct 2009
ashamed2 opps...double post. edited x3
ReplyQuote

mushroomfeilds mushroomfeilds SA Posts: 320
13 2 Oct 2009
i just had a look at your drawings and i love them happy.
cheers i cant usually write well at all just occasonally theres one thing that works well, i guess this was one of them
xx happy happy
ReplyQuote

ckimana ckimana NSW Posts: 2545
14 5 Oct 2009
LB, fantastic poem... you have talent. Would love to hear more happy
ReplyQuote

Frenzal bop Frenzal bop SA Posts: 778
15 10 Oct 2009
The other night about 4 am i woke up and stanley (cat) was hissing at another neighborhood kitty who was sitting by my door. stanley then spent the rest of the night camping the door making sure that the neighbourhood kitty didn't come back.

The next day i decided to write something about it though it isnt the best thing i have ever written im still pleased with it considering i had no direction when writing it.. enjoy..

goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore
goodbye neighborhood kitty, stay away from my door
i'll, bite, i'll scratch, i'll snarl at you.
with hairs on end ill growl at you
goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore

go away neighborhood kitty, your not welcome at this place
go away neighborhood kitty I hate your stupid face
get off my lawn its my front yard, my house, my car
go away neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore

hello neighborhood kitty, you come back for some more
hello neighborhood kitty, meowing at my door
this is my house, my bed, my cat food
I just don't seam to get through to you
goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore
ReplyQuote

mushroomfeilds mushroomfeilds SA Posts: 320
16 10 Oct 2009
Frenzal Bop said:
The other night about 4 am i woke up and stanley (cat) was hissing at another neighborhood kitty who was sitting by my door. stanley then spent the rest of the night camping the door making sure that the neighbourhood kitty didn't come back.

The next day i decided to write something about it though it isnt the best thing i have ever written im still pleased with it considering i had no direction when writing it.. enjoy..

goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore
goodbye neighborhood kitty, stay away from my door
i'll, bite, i'll scratch, i'll snarl at you.
with hairs on end ill growl at you
goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore

go away neighborhood kitty, your not welcome at this place
go away neighborhood kitty I hate your stupid face
get off my lawn its my front yard, my house, my car
go away neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore

hello neighborhood kitty, you come back for some more
hello neighborhood kitty, meowing at my door
this is my house, my bed, my cat food
I just don't seam to get through to you
goodbye neighborhood kitty, don't come here anymore
aww thats tons cute
ReplyQuote

ckimana ckimana NSW Posts: 2545
17 10 Oct 2009
My god Bop that's unreal, love it happy
ReplyQuote

Frenzal bop Frenzal bop SA Posts: 778
18 11 Oct 2009
thanks guys
ReplyQuote

Frenzal bop Frenzal bop SA Posts: 778
19 11 Oct 2009
Hers another one i wrote, its about a break up. a bit more personal.

FINE!!!

walk away without me, leave me in a panic state
I'll sit here alone, the scars on my arm help me concentrate
you said you cared about me then my heart you break
I can't live without you so Valium i take

I don't know what i did to deserve your disrespect
It seams one day you want me the next that goes to shit
my feelings are just cancer in your stupid mind
my tears speak for me yet your the one who's blind

I don't like you anymore
ReplyQuote

mushroomfeilds mushroomfeilds SA Posts: 320
20 11 Oct 2009
wow. thats so sad but so cute and wow.
you writeso well im jelous.
ReplyQuote

 [ 1 ]  [ 2 ]  [ 3 ] 

www.unleashed.org.au